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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-01-29 09:40 PM



The Words of Love We Said

She has a way of
getting to my heart,
getting to my heart.
So how dare circumstance
keep us apart,
keep us apart.
Someday, together will mean
just what it says,
just what it says.
Someday, forever will embrace
the words of love we said.
The words of love we said.

JamesLee
28January
2007



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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2007-01-29 10:27 PM


Simply lovely~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2007-01-30 07:19 AM



Are you working on this song, James?
I would like to see a little more.




JL
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Texas, USA
3 posted 2007-01-30 01:22 PM


"Someday, forever will embrace
the words of love we said."

Very nice!

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-01-30 06:04 PM


James.... just lovely!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2007-01-31 09:59 AM


This was good
This was good


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