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0 posted 2007-01-29 04:21 PM


Li-Young, I do not know
why I remembered you
your book

those hesitant paper blooms you
seemed to draw in space, another world
a touch past fingertips

sketched second language paintings
of a place I couldn’t know
yet did,
and I do not know why

why I would drive,
driven
dare the place again, the exact shelf in a store
I never visit

bless myself with the last copy,
retail of course,
nor why I would search, fingers trembling
for those words again,
those words

not to find,
ask myself why I would expect the magic
the

        I recall a far
        season of flowers

        when for love I crept to the edge of a roof to reach
        a petal-decked branch…


magic



For Li-Young Lee, whose poetry overwhelms me.

© Copyright 2007 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-01-29 04:25 PM


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2 posted 2007-01-29 05:17 PM


love the process of this thought...

"sketched second language paintings
of a place I couldn’t know
yet did,
and I do not know why"

as before, as always, spectacular...

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3 posted 2007-01-29 06:19 PM


Your writing draws me in..holds me..
your writing is...Magic!
I thank you for this keeper.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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4 posted 2007-01-29 06:35 PM



And I can see why...

now I must start
my own search.

Oh, Thank you, Ed.




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5 posted 2007-01-29 06:49 PM


This book is named "the city in which i love you" (yes, all lower case).....it's a collection of poems that are written mainly of her son and her father, and of course of herself and her life as a woman of Chinese parentage, transplanted from a personal admixture of Indonesia, Hong Kong, Macau and Japan.

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6 posted 2007-01-29 07:08 PM


Alright Ed, I just bought a used
version of :
Winged Seed (Hardcover)
by Li-young Lee at Amazon because of you:

“From Publishers Weekly
In this lyrical memoir, Chinese-American poet Li-Young (Rose: The City in Which I Love You) recalls scenes of his childhood and youth in a kaleidoscope of dreams and nightmares with a factual recitation of events. He moves back and forth among prerevolutionary China, when his forbears were rich and privileged; the China of Mao Zedong, when his father was Mao's physician; Indonesia, where he and his family fled in the early 1950s after the father's release from the leper colony where he had been imprisoned for suspected disloyalty; and thence to Hong Kong and the U.S., where his father became a Presbyterian minister. Through the illogic and distortion of his dreams, Li-Young leads readers into the emotional landscape of his childhood, while objective events become clear in the narrative. In this evocative tale, politics plays a lesser role than family history and love in a world that was sad, frightening and hard for a child to understand. For the reader, however, Li-Young's portraits of the times are vividly illuminating.
Copyright 1995 Reed Business Information, Inc.”

In exchange I want you to e-mail me poems as examples
as to why I should then read collections of his* poems.

John


* "his" or "her"?

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7 posted 2007-01-29 07:22 PM


If you bought the book, John, you will probably figure it out for yourself.  

Whether male or female, the writing can be delicate and indescribable from either shore.  I will welcome the chance to purchase one, or more, books, of this poet.

Again, my thanks, Ed.


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8 posted 2007-01-29 07:41 PM


Ed..I was thinking how wonderful it would be to have someone one day, go to a book store to buy a book you'd written...with just this same excitement.  You are good, you know!
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9 posted 2007-01-29 08:07 PM


I wish Li-Young could see how wonderfully you've written your reaction to her poetry. You write so beautifully, I am sure she would be extremely honored.

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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10 posted 2007-03-05 03:42 PM


I would search, fingers trembling
for those words again,
those words

A reaction I often experience reading your work... *S*

This, my friend, is so beautiful... the poet touched by another's poetry... and in turn, touches. *S*

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11 posted 2007-03-06 11:46 AM


  I recall a far
        season of flowers

        when for love I crept to the edge of a roof to reach
        a petal-decked branch…

magic


absolutely gorgeous....perfectly sweet malize which enforces a larger reality of the effects of poetry/words/tinges with caricature...and substantial knowledge of gentile pastorial rhyme...without the rhyme, yanno?  I loved this and am so happy for the inspiration....you've apparently not only gained but now possess.  Outstanding write

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12 posted 2007-03-06 11:59 AM


Ed~
I know how precious a moment it is for you to hold her words in your hands ... what treasures reach us from afar to inspire~

*smiles*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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13 posted 2007-03-07 08:01 AM


thanks Ed for bringing this to light


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14 posted 2007-03-07 01:25 PM


Thank you for introducing me to Li-Young Lee. Excellent poem.

April-Lyn

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