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ivordavies
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0 posted 2007-01-29 04:16 PM



Cycle of Life

When ‘whole’ splits down to form anew,
you are reborn, but remain too.
You take your baggage back to earth,
although forgotten, at your birth.

When ‘life’ is run and you return,
with all that in the flesh you learn.
Then your rebirth should feed the ‘whole’,
as you again share common soul.

So angels, humans all are one,
it matters not, where what is done.
You'll carry all well past the grave,
it's just one part of ‘life’ you played.

So coming, going, all the same....
our lifetime’s part of greater game.
Be sure you’re not returned to hell,
enjoy your life, but live it well!

Ivor G Davies

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2007-01-29 04:20 PM


How true...how true.
I think I indeed carry a heavy karma.  

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-01-29 04:21 PM


Ivor,
I think we are all on that bicycle.
Good write enjoyed the read.

trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2007-01-29 05:58 PM


Ivor I liked this poem..This was just a 3 minute write i did where I trembled of the thought dieing and going back to earth. I do see your point and you did a nice job on the poem
My luggage is heavy I no longer wish to hold
Like a bad hand played, yes i wish to fold.
If I ever returned back to this friggin earth
I would shoot my next mother that gave me birth.

Nothing in this world again I wish to Share
Being recarnated back to earth is so unfair
Most people would think it would be a delight
Try to take me back you will get a fight.

Heaven when I die will be the place for me
Heaven sounds like a wonderful place to be
So let me die and go to my rightful place
Where I can worship god and fell his grace

ivordavies
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4 posted 2007-01-29 06:47 PM



trutodaraiders

My poem actually gives you the best of both worlds......

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When ‘whole’ splits down to form anew,
you are reborn, but remain too.
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and you are supposed to contribute something to the 'whole' and leave your baggage behind!

Your poetry, however, shows your justified concerns. I personally feel that our earthly life is for personal development......

Ivor

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-01-29 07:29 PM


"Be sure you’re not returned to hell,
enjoy your life, but live it well!"

~ I've been to hell and I ain't goin' back!

I'm living my life to the best of my ability and hopefully I am building lots of good karma that will hold me in good stead for the next time around!

Your words resonate with my beliefs as well!

Love makes the world go 'round, and 'round, and 'round...

Linda



ivordavies
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6 posted 2007-02-21 08:58 PM


Linda,

I am sure we have a lot of rational in common!

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