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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Paint Me be my artist sketch the line I will tenderly cross it canvas in sweet pastel brush that swirls my sky dipped in watercolor under moonlight echo of my shadow played in light still a life breathing original oil you are the dance of color tinted eye nectar unframed passion be my artist paint me “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
And I was just thinking of getting back to my art table. Been away too long. This just nudged me a little closer Helen. Beautiful images here! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous write! wow! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady You want a multi-medium job, that's not easy. Enjoyed |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you are the dance of color tinted eye nectar unframed passion be my artist paint me wow indeed!!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"be my artist sketch the line I will tenderly cross it" awesome Helen |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely! Lots of good imagery and I like the play on words. *hugs*...jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... Excellent! *S* |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Very beautiful -- breath taking. A |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. /pip/Forum103/HTML/001391.html Call it linked verse . . . John . |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
No matter what I read from you, your energy is clear and precise. I love your balance of fire and soft-sultriness. Always a pleasure to catch your poetry. Love, reg |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"you are the dance of color" I like this whole piece, but I really like this line!  |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Nicely done! What color would you like? |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"tinted eye nectar" I enjoyed the hue of this piece. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
This is one of those poems that makes you hold your breath while you read it. It is stunning ~~ and excellent. Love it. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this was a pleasure...so filled with such good lines...liked this one best: "dipped in watercolor under moonlight echo of my shadow" |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
And it would be a beautiful painting....Just like your poem, Take care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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