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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2007-03-14 03:11 PM


“… I feel like a Motherless Child”

Yes it has happened at last,
The waiting and wasting away
Into eternity my mother is cast
Only her memories now stay.

Gloom


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-03-14 04:27 PM


oh Proff...   Peace m'friend
wordwizard
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on the way to next world
2 posted 2007-03-14 04:28 PM


If your Mom has passed away my sincere condolences, she would appreciate your thoughts


1slick_lady
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3 posted 2007-03-14 06:37 PM


i am so sorry

icequeen
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4 posted 2007-03-15 01:11 AM


My sympathies, dear. If I can help in any way just ask. I'm here if you need to talk.

(The song you quoted --- I can hear in my mind, Darius singing it. I've always loved it. "a long, long way from home....."


Caroline

aziza
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5 posted 2007-03-15 01:36 AM


Well written and you touched my heart.  I am sorry about your Mother.

A

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2007-03-15 05:00 AM


My condolences, A...


nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2007-03-15 06:19 AM


knowing and feeling the loss...

M

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2007-03-15 07:05 AM


sorry to hear that

but she's in a better place

that's what I say to myself anyway

Sadelite
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9 posted 2007-03-16 09:22 PM


"Sometimes I feel ike a Motherless child,"

   I understand.  My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family.

Sadelite

Sunshine
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10 posted 2007-03-16 10:31 PM


Dear Professor,

I likened to my brother
when lost of adults parent
that we were now nearly
orphans, except that we had
one another, and a sister;

and while I am still a sister,
there is still an orphanage
with my name upon it.

I send my thoughts to you, yours,
and the past lives of your loves.


Janette
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11 posted 2007-03-17 12:21 PM


And memories are treasures indeed.

My condolences.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2007-03-17 10:54 PM


Hugs Gloom.
She is immortal in your heart.
TD

jak
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13 posted 2007-03-17 10:55 PM


powerful sentiment.

Jak
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