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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-01-28 01:32 PM



It's there
in the "touch me
if you dare"


Waiting
for the page to turn
and eyes to yearn...

the feel of return.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Krishankins
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1 posted 2007-01-28 01:52 PM


I love the last line of this one.
It is so familiar....

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-01-28 02:17 PM


well sometimes, you think the feelings have subsided or have just been lost...when they may have just taken a vacation

M

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2007-01-28 07:29 PM


Return, indeed -- it's good to be back!

-MVS



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passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-01-28 08:07 PM


nice
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-01-29 02:34 AM


oooh yes, it's there!!  wonderful!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The Lady
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The Southwest
6 posted 2007-01-29 01:40 PM



It's there
in the "touch me
if you dare"

love it M

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