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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-01-28 01:11 PM



Hope rests
in eyes that gaze upon,
though reality
slows the beat of a heart
with each blink
of unknowing.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2007-01-28 01:39 PM


MzBliss~

Twenty words of hope
Delivered in perfect ink
Rorschach would be proud
Of the ink spots of your mind
Totally rich imagery~


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-01-28 01:44 PM


Thanks Marge..I hope all is well where you are.I think I am pretty worn out, therefore the less than words.
Wishing for a vacation to some place warm.
hugs
M

Krishankins
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3 posted 2007-01-28 01:50 PM


Sweet!!! I am in love with the short writes. You have renewed my romance with this one!!

My child's smile tells me there's still hope

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2007-01-28 02:20 PM


well you know how eyes can tell you many things...I watch for a glimpse of hope in them and when it isn't there...my heart beat slows down...


M

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2007-01-28 07:31 PM


Keep that heart beating -- you've got much to offer the world...

-MVS



You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2007-01-28 08:06 PM


glad I didn't miss this
The Lady
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7 posted 2007-01-29 01:29 AM



nicely done M

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2007-01-29 02:31 AM


wonderful!!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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