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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2007-01-28 11:05 AM


You're - My Life

As the time goes by, killed by hours of waiting,
The hope in last tears is revived.
When I chose to give in, I was so mistaken -
Couldn't see that one reason to fight.
Then you've opened my eyes to the truth.
Please, forgive me for all times I lied
To myself... All I need now is you.

Just the rain reminds me of latter tears.
I close my eyes and dream again.
A breath of wind... I feel you here,
You're life, still flowing in my veins,
And in each tear - each drop of rain -
I see your face... can't live without you.

You're every tear in my eyes,
Leave everything but you behind,
I'm locking all; I'm turning back
For the last time,
For you're - my life.

Come to my dreams and stop the time,
Let know you're here, my angel, fallen.
You've broken your wings - I'd give you mine,
And give you hope, from you once stolen.
You're more than precious memories,
You're my twin soul - your heart I'll treasure.

And every time I look at the dawn,
Far at the horizon see your eyes.
You're miles away, you're there alone -
Your heart's with me - I'm still alive.
I can't pretend, I won't even try
To escape from this love and to lie to both us...

You're every tear in my eyes,
Leave everything but you behind,
I'm locking all; I'm turning back
For the last time,
For you're - my life.


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trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2007-01-28 11:10 AM


You cannot put a price on this poem written with such emotion. I can understand this poem. I really relate to this stanza. I use to have a sign on my door that said, "Dont pinch me I am dreaming."
Come to my dreams and stop the time,
Let know you're here, my angel, fallen.

Krishankins
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2 posted 2007-01-28 02:40 PM


Memory Lane is a street not on any map, but we have all taken it. If you ask me, it needs a few more street lamps like this one!!
A Beautiful Disaster
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3 posted 2007-01-30 01:58 AM


Thanks, people!
I'm glad someone can relate.

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