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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-01-28 07:35 AM


Coulda Gotta Lotta Fun

I've lived a lotta lotta years
though I'm still very young.
I seen a lotta lotta life
climbed and slipped the rung.
A lotta lotta little things
have helped me on my way
I also had a lotta lotta
lotta things to say.

Sometimes I feel I gotta lotta
things from loving life.
I know I gotta lotta love
from my kids and my wife.
I gotta lotta things as well
from folk who passed me by.
But mainly gotta lotta fun
by trying not to cry.

So if you've gotta lotta things
that coulda make you sad.
You coulda gotta lotta fun
by trying to be glad.
For if you coulda gotta lotta
happiness as well.
You coulda gotta lotta fun
by learning how to spell!

Ivor G Davies



The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-01-28 09:28 AM


I gotta lotta out of your cleverly written poem! Your wit and charm come shining through ~ as well as your wisdom, Dear Sage!

Namaste

Linda

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-01-28 09:35 AM



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2007-01-28 11:00 AM


Ivor,
You gotta lolla stuff in this write. Enjoyed

ivordavies
Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
4 posted 2007-02-24 03:01 AM


A lotta, lotta, thank you's
for reading every line
in broken, spoken, mutterings
that tumble into rhyme

I don't know why you tolerate
the garbish that I spill
for teachers used to shout and say
my spellin made them ill!

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