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unpredictable_mortal
Junior Member

since 2007-01-27

Posts 10
Malaysia

0 posted 2007-01-27 11:31 AM

I hope all of you love it as much as me loving the very moment i wrote it.

Title: I Am Home
Author: Unpredictable Mortal

He sat by the bed,
With a guitar in his hands,
He strummed the first note,
And started singing a familiar song.

As I stood by near looking at him play,
Listening to him as he started to sing,
The moments were sweet and the memories begin,
It then began the story of me and him.

What did he do to me?
With his music and his song,
Then came the touch and the caresses,
And then I knew I was almost home.

I’m falling fast and hard into a web of unknowns,
I don’t know him well nor do I know him much,
Somehow I knew he is mine to have,
But I am not that strong to have my heart hurt once again.

I feel protected in his arms,
Love the way his arms found its place of rest,
What is it in that strong embrace?
That made me feel as if I am almost home.

Words of wisdom from another made me feel I should let go,
But I love this world of fantasy which I am holding on,
I was once told love is a deceitful web of illusion,
But with him, I felt that I’ve been sheltered from the storm.

Alone tonight on my bed with my thoughts aside,
I couldn’t stop thinking of the song that he sang,
He made me see that love deserves a second chance,
Oh, let me be home with him in my arms after tonight!

See, now what I am trying to do,
Is to make myself love him as much as I could give,
Till the day he feels safe in my arms,
That is when both of us found a home in each others heart.

[This message has been edited by unpredictable_mortal (01-27-2007 12:11 PM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-01-27 01:05 PM

UM~
Welcome to PiP~

'Home' is such a cozy place to a heart that knows just where that is~

Enjoy your stay within our wonderful circle of poetic friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2007-01-27 01:43 PM

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-01-27 02:07 PM

Hello, UM

Welcome to pipTalk.com!

May your heart always have, and be, a warming hearth.

Loving Light,
Earth Angel

unpredictable_mortal
Junior Member

since 2007-01-27

Posts 10
Malaysia

4 posted 2007-01-27 09:51 PM

Thank you so much for your warmest greetings. I really hope i'll write more poems and be able to get comments on my work

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-01-29 05:32 AM

Hello and Welcome to our blue pages... I enjoyed your first piece and hope to read more of your work ... be well RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2007-01-29 11:12 AM

welcome to PIP and what an entrance, reclaiming the promise of a future of love.

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