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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Am I Will I remain in Childs Naïve? That can not bring me to conceive An open path an open door A thought of mind to stay believe And will I never come to find Remaining always semi-blind And feeling all this pain and awe By limits of this brain and mind I say to you there’s non I’ve read That’s now alive or past and dead Can take me to the very core That time will stay and will not shred I only see a chaos bend Too hard to stay or to defend For change comes swooping down in roar That sweeps you the abyss of end So I am caught within the dupe Choked in its umbilical loop |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
I say to you there’s non I’ve read That’s now alive or past and dead Can take me to the very core That time will stay and will not shred Really sorry mate, I try my hardest! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it feels like that sometimes yeah  morning Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ivor, I know you do mate and so do I. passing, I think everyone feels like that sometime.  |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Nice write Seymour. Enjoyed the thought provoking read. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy... just wonderful words here  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sewasham Thank you for the read and reply, have a good one. RDB, Glad you enjoyed, thanks for the read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Mr. T., your closing line put a very disturbing image of you in my haloed head! "So I am caught within the dupe Choked in its umbilical loop"  Never mind, I won't let Chaos claim your sanity!   EA P.S. I am sending some shears for you to use whenever an umbilical loop threatens to cut off your life force! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, I think it was my Randy Dragon that put in the last lines. LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good morning, Sy...how about an apple for your eye? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sy darling man when I come into PiP’s as I sometimes do I always make a point of reading you. Your writing is always and has always been something special, it is like a beacon to me it shines with a special light as does no other. Your work truly is amazing and always worth seeking out. I don’t often get the chance to come and visit these days, sometimes I simply cannot manage to sit at the computer let alone type. But when I have a good day, or even a good hour since days that were all good are so few and far between, I come and sit at the feet of the master, and the one I like to listen to most is you. Love and warm stuff as always Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie I always enjoy a good apple. :kiss; Marsha, Enjoyed your comment and sorry to read you are not well. We all do the best we can and I am sure you are doing your best. Thank you and stay well. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
So good to read you again, Sir! My first stop, as always, when I'm "back in blue for a moment or two..." Despite Change and its predictable uncertainty, your poetry remains a constant upon which I can rely and to which I can always look forward. Another classic here.  -MVSYou CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, So nice to see you back again, I hope you can stay for a while. We missed you. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
I only see a chaos bend Too hard to stay or to defend For change comes swooping down in roar That sweeps you the abyss of end So I am caught within the dupe Choked in its umbilical loop ~AHO~ Seymore Tabin,it is a test only time,un-time will unravel there is no stopping the changes that must be,but my brother the chaos ends in peace and beauty of another kind,a healing for us all! blessings
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wredgranny, LOL Your mouth to Gods ear, thank you dear. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
clicked and saved..Dont worry this poem is nestled in saftey somewhere on my hard drive. unless my virus scanner goes on vacation. Chaos always has me running. Seems to always come when i lest aspect it. Enjoyed..~Bill |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
trutodaraiders Thank you for the save, glad you enjoyed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Childs Naïve may be a very deep wisdom don't you think Sir Sy? I love this... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one Sy! In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Yes it can but that is turning up the fan. LOL Thank you Nancy and I hope you are well now. |
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