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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-01-27 07:19 AM

Trapped In Understanding

Though I've never danced with you,
I wonder the feel of the lean.
For there is no contradiction in silence
and the sounds of a beating heart
when that touch is felt
and the pace moves forward,
each step an inspiration of hold.

Music of infinity secrets the dreams
of a trapped heart in understanding.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2007-01-27 06:29 PM

Can't believe there are no replies to this. M-lady, this is a phenomenal write. Those last two lines....!!!! *hugs*...jo

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2007-01-27 10:08 PM

I agree with jo
those last two lines are huge

wonderful work as always M

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2007-01-27 11:04 PM

Thanks Jo...I am never sure why anyone responds or doesn't respond to anything I write. I just accept what is.

Thank you TL.

I appreciate your kind words

M

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

4 posted 2007-01-28 07:36 PM

"The feel of the lean" and indeed, the last two lines -- classic imagery in the style you write so well... a vessel of reserved emotion reaching...

-MVS

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2007-01-29 02:33 AM

Music of infinity secrets the dreams
of a trapped heart in understanding

loved this!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2007-01-29 06:00 AM

Music of infinity secrets the dreams
of a trapped heart in understanding.

I agree whole heartidly with all those comments above, this is truly poignant and an insightful write.

thank you

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2007-01-29 11:37 AM

Me too, Maureen. Beautiful..
Sandra

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2007-01-29 01:19 PM

drawn in by the title...you wove it well into your write...very nicely done.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2007-01-29 01:46 PM

Love this Maureen in its entirety..
but those last two lines? WOW!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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