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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2007-01-27 12:28 PM



I pray you're not ignoring me
silence is a painful thing
the art - invisability
circles like eternity
on my finger, wed.

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iliana
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1 posted 2007-01-27 01:04 AM


"circles like eternity
on my finger, wed"

WIHTOT, Ser.  Amazing how that happens, huh....the invisibility trick.  Ouch ouch ouch.  Just remember you're only invisible to those who cannot see.  :-)  *hugs* ...jo

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-01-27 09:58 AM


painful yes

the yellow brick road seems to be full of miles of silence


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2007-01-27 11:46 AM


serenity,
Allot of gold in them circles.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-01-27 12:58 PM



Made me think of the concentric circles of friendship that keep bringing friends back to where they've been~

Touching, sometimes ever briefly ... then spinning on to return when least expected~



Does that make sense ?
Yeah .. it probably does~
At least it does to me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-01-27 02:03 PM


That kind of silence is a killer!

I totally concur with iliana's astute remark ~ "Just remember you're only invisible to those who cannot see".


Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-01-29 05:38 AM


you're definitely not invisible to us Bella Serenity! hang in there...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2007-01-29 07:44 AM


Sometimes, like a rock to water,
the ripples widen...

but they still ripple
around the nucleus...

wonderful, concise,
and thought-provoking...




trutodaraiders
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8 posted 2007-01-29 10:37 AM


No kidding you always have a way to tickle one's thoughts. Loved the read
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
9 posted 2007-01-29 11:36 AM


Great way to say this. Don't you  hate that feeling?
Sandra

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10 posted 2007-03-05 03:37 PM


When I'm wallowing in lonely, I sometimes remember... it can be even lonelier when there's another person in the room.

Hugs to you, my friend. *S*

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden
11 posted 2007-03-05 09:02 PM


You're never invisible to me.
I always see you.

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