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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-01-26 09:30 PM



Golden orb of sunrise' greeting.
Cloudsoft rush of mem'ries fleeting.
Sweet-smelled scent of flowers arising.
This my Love's advent apprising.

Here she hies, no sound preceeding,
suddenly, as stormwind's greeting.
Filled with joy, extreme elation!
Heartbeats loud - across the nation.

This, the time I have awaited.
Now is when, with breath abated.
Clutching, holding, tightly weaving,
Fantasies of mind's deceiving.

Gone the thoughts of love derided.
Here, at last our hearts abided.
Stilled forever, hordes of anguish.
Bliss eternal, in a dream's wish.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2007-01-26 09:34 PM


sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!


trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2007-01-26 10:28 PM


Thank You Serenity
Beatrice Boyle
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3 posted 2007-01-27 01:57 AM


This is soo lovely Bill. I love it!

Bea


trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2007-01-27 02:03 AM


Ahh thank you Bea for stopping bye and taking the time to leave me a comment. *hugs*
LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-01-27 07:14 AM


Gone the thoughts of love derided.
Here, at last our hearts abided.
Stilled forever, hordes of anguish.
Bliss eternal, in a dream's wish.

Dreams bring such pleasure, as do your poems...enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2007-01-27 07:21 AM


This, the time I have awaited.
Now is when, with breath abated.
Clutching, holding, tightly weaving,
Fantasies of mind's deceiving.

...and there is that

M
( just remember to love that beautiful daughter)

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