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ivordavies
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0 posted 2007-01-26 06:37 PM


Morning Massacre

A rainstorm in the morning, helps to wash away the night,
A rainbow seems to promise, that this day will turn out right.
Our feathered friends all gathering, in search of morning treat,
Could anything go wrong today?  Just look below your feet.

Heavy rain is death to us, it creates a muddy sea,
Of sodden soil, a watery grave, for those who can’t get free.
But terror hangs above our home, as birds all flock around,
They know that we have got no choice, we’ll be their killing ground.

Wonderful for all who greet, this frenzy with delight,
To watch the pretty birds catch worms, oh what a lovely sight!
For as the waters seeps below, we worms rise one by one,
And try to seek a ‘safer’ place, dried by the morning sun.

Before our heads have seen the light, their beaks begin to tear,
They rip my family into shreds, before they get ‘their’ air.
This feast is at our fatal cost, our numbers dwindle down,
If only we weren’t forced to rise, from safety underground.

Today I was the lucky one, the one they never caught,
I’ll live to squirm another day, alone with life, and thought.
To live my days in solitude, to have no friends around,
And still to face the terrors of that ‘pitter patter’ sound.

So if you’re happy with your friends, but feel that you are down,
Unless you’re ‘forced’ to rise above the place that you have found.
It’s safer to accept your lot, for sometimes you can’t see,
The place you struggle to achieve, could leave you alone… like me.

Ivor G Davies.


© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-01-27 09:45 AM


thought-provoking write

reminds me of my move to Kansas and then back again

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-01-27 11:58 AM


Ivor,
You have a conundrum mate, either way you won't come out alive. LOL Enjoyed the read.

Fairplay
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3 posted 2007-01-27 07:10 PM


Then theres the Bird Flue....

What precautions should we take I wonder

Eric

ivordavies
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4 posted 2007-01-27 07:21 PM


Eric,

A bird in the hand's worth two in the bush
but I was taught to avoid the thrush.
There's something fishy about bird flue
but surely Fairplay, you know just what to do.
Never kiss birds with a sneeze up their nose
or avian flue may be the least of your woes
Now come Fairplay, you've had your say
for the sake of the worms, chase the birds away!

sewasham
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5 posted 2007-01-27 11:38 PM


This lesson you have taught us well
We should enjoy the flower's smell
And stay on ground that's nice and firm
Or else we'll end up like the worm

A nice write Ivor. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Fairplay
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6 posted 2007-01-28 08:54 PM


Two birds in the bush…never ?
I had one up a tree
Along with you and David
Outnumbered one to  three

In case you have forgotten her
She might now be a granny
We had her in the coal shed too
In fact her name  was Fanny

Before mind’s all go haywire
Or I get skinned alive
Maybe I should mention here
She was only five…,…

Now although it sounds much worse
We were playing hide and seek
Both of us the same age
You two took a peek

I think you were just guarding me
Five is a funny age
Just in case I came to harm
Or put dad in a rage

See our family was so big
Brother guarded  brother
No one got the best of us
We watched out for each other

ivordavies
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7 posted 2007-02-24 03:07 AM


Thank you all, but please remember to feed the birds!
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