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In One Wind of Whisper
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In One Wind of Whisper |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In One Wind of Whisper ~*Marge Tindal*~ Should I come softly furled in words of sweet adorn Would you welcome me into your heart as new breath greets the morn ? Would you caress me tenderly holding me up to new light Then tuck me gently into your heart as day turns to twi-of-night ? Would you keep me safe and warm as the muse-hours pressed us close Would you ... could you What do you suppose ? Morning brings me freshly inked to you on the rise of sun In one wind of whisper I will not come undone~ Wrap me about your think-of-mind keep me as the day winds to a close Light one candle with which to read me I'll be your soft suppose~ Suppose for just a moment that we are of likened mind In just one wind of whisper what ... tell me what would you hope to find~ For I am meant to be all things to keep you smiling through the day Then give you feathered pillow on which your head to lay~ In one wind of whisper I am by your side In one gentle wind of whisper in your heart ... I will reside~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Reads good to me, you can start any time.    |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
absolutely beautiful marge,  My spirit will rise |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
How captivating and soft, enough to steal my heart away. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Your poems are gentle to the readers eyes. May your words be wrapped in the softest thread that god has to offer. ~Bill |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"In one wind of whisper I am by your side In one gentle wind of whisper in your heart ... I will reside~" I echo Bill above ..the softest of soft are your words. Most beautifully said dear Marge.  In the midst of winter, |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is absolutely beautiful Marge Love ya, Betty |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is just beautiful. As always! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely musing, Marge! ....jo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
How not, how not....how ever, I ask, not? This is simply lovely, Marge....you bless. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
You outdid yourself again Marge...I'm speechless!  Bea |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is beautiful Marge and so completely you. I wouldn't need a signature to know. Love, Joyce |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Suppose for just a moment that we are of likened mind In just one wind of whisper what ... tell me what would you hope to find~ Marge, you are alwasy such a pleasure to read...and did I tell you, the new photograph of you glows, you are a beatiful woman... Love to you and thanks for sharing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so lovely to read, Marge... M |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
And how could anyone say no to this? Just lovely, Marge. As usual.  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I so thank you all ... remember, when the wind whispers someone must listen ... and so I do~  You ... yes you' bless me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"For I am meant to be all things to keep you smiling through the day" ~ and that, Margie Girl, I am sure you do beyond all earthly measure!  Utterly lover-ly!!! EO |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a wind of whisper how lovely Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL for letting my words come to rest in your heart~ It's a BEAUTIFUL DAY to be a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, darling one this was just so gentle on my soul, a wisp of poetry stroking my inner mind. I love the softness the fluidity and the imagery. I so wish I could write even half so well, but that of course is what makes you the star doesn’t it? You just know I love your writing don’t you? like you forever Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....I love the wind!! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Reminds me of the breeze lingering at the bottom of a waterfall Marge. So soft and refreshing. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...This reads like a breath of fresh air and as sweet as the flowers of Spring...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Refreshingly welcoming, gently warming, serenely comforting and purrrfect in every way. Thanks for sharing this lovely piece. Rae |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Marge, just wonderful !! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I will sleep well after reading this. It is absolutely beautiful! miscellanea |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
In one wind of whisper I am by your side In one gentle wind of whisper in your heart ... I will reside~ My sister/friend with such a heart full of beauty there is no doubt to me you hear the Four Winds and answer. There is so much of your heritage that is captured in your every sharing,there is our grandmother voices whose truth rings from you to me! Vsigi beloved sister!
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Each of you bring a special feeling of pleasure to my heart ... just being able to share with all is my delight~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
In one wind of whisper I will not come undone~ How I love these two lines, for more reasons than anyone could know. As always, Marge, your talent for making the beautiful available for us to see is remarkable. Your writing always makes me glad I have returned home to Passions for a visit. And thank you for welcoming lemonraindrops to PiP today... she is my niece, and I am, of course, extremely proud of her! She inspires me to begin writing again. Hugs to you~~~ Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~The winds are whispering congratulations to you dear Marge on this special night~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Caroline~ Aw ... thanks hon ... and I'm sure she will fit right into this wonderful circle~ Nance~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Just found this beauty in my e-mail Marge. It is a beautiful poem like all of your work. You are indeed a professional. Huggs Kimberly |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kimberly~ Wanting to make sure and thank you for the kindness of your replies to my stuff~ *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my friend... this is absolutely lovely. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernLove~ As is your friendship~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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