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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2007-01-25 03:36 PM


why can't i just me be
the one that went out all
the time

what a great night that was
is it so bad to want to escape
for awhile the pain i want to go
away

it haunts me everyday im living
on E

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2007-01-27 11:20 PM


I keep coming back to your poem...and reading it again and again...it has a haunting beauty...nicely done
Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2007-01-28 12:34 PM


thanks its about not being myself anyore ive been so sick that i fear thati lost the old me. i cant do the things ive done before sigh

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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