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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-01-25 01:47 PM


Man of love,
song and rhyme,
gentle soul speaks
to me.

Nature is your friend,
all things call to me,
every season you are there.

The wind whispers,
your name across my cheek,
leaving a touch of warmth.

The snowflakes silently,
they appear, softly landing,
like your voice,
falling upon my skin.

Raindrops slowly splash,
like the tears of sorrow,
a heart aches, longing.

Man of love,
no words can describe you,
for you are, of one design.

Made with gentle hands,
gentle eyes, that care,
and a heart that bleeds.

One would call you a treasure,
a rariety among men,
that you are, and more.

How could one of great value,
be as sand seeping through
your hands?

I call you wonderful,
beautiful, loving,
Unique.

I call you love in its finest form,
a man complete,
a gift rare,
a gift Unique.



J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (01-26-2007 04:55 PM).]

© Copyright 2007 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
jarrett
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since 2006-05-10
Posts 72
Ut, USA
1 posted 2007-01-26 12:06 PM


wow that's wonderful thanks.
Tricia

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
Posts 820
CA
2 posted 2007-01-26 10:36 AM


You painted a nice picture. Just saw 1 thing I noticed splash was misspelled. Thank you for the early morning read
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-01-26 11:23 AM


Hi, A Romantic Heart! Your pen lives up to your name!

You scribe with the best in the realm of romance!

Does that man have a brother? lol


EA

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