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Awakening
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Awakening |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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Faintest tinge of morning's blush annoints the Eastern sky. Birdsong, tentative, barely heard, by my 'dearest love' and I. Crimson streaks announce the dawn while sounds of night diminish. Daylight comes on quiet note - our evening's slumbers finish. Slowly she opens a languorous eye - a smile already beaming! Reaching out with wide-open arms... we capture what we've been dreaming! Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
 beautiful Bill RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes this is gorgeous |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A perfect morning. You really captured the spectrum of dream to awakening here Bill. Pretty write. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how utterly romantic...loved the flow of this and the feeling it gave... |
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