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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-01-24 06:14 PM

Perchance to Dream

I haven't slept of late, you know
for worry has its will.
And though each day the gambles on,
the tiring does fulfill.

A month I've almost still to go.
At times seems long but then
missing faces will unfold
in February when...

Moving on will be my call
and eyes of 26
will leave me tearful, missing such
a treasured keepsake mix.

They follow me where e'er I go
a smile, mine, theirs to keep.
For now I'll travel every day
in hopes they'll dream their sleep.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2007-01-24 08:14 PM

Maureen,
Well done and I enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2007-01-24 08:28 PM

they will miss you as much as you will miss them I'm sure

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-01-24 10:14 PM

nicely done Maureen

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2007-01-25 09:05 AM

aww this tugs M. Nicely done lady.

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

5 posted 2007-01-25 12:01 PM

This title was perfect for this poem. Thank you for the read i loved the poem

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2007-01-25 12:09 PM

Beautiful heartfelt write M.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2007-01-25 12:25 PM

good read

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2007-01-25 01:56 PM

MsBliss~
You always give me something to aspire to~
Thank you for the depths of your heart ... that reach out and touch mine~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2007-01-25 05:54 PM

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2007-01-25 08:02 PM

I sure understand where you are coming from. We tend to get attached. Don't we?

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

11 posted 2007-01-25 09:33 PM

Write of them
after you are gone . . .

John

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2007-01-25 10:08 PM

When you do it well, you
leave behind the smiles of hope.

I'm sure you've given them all
a reason to forge forward.

Well done, m'dear, on all aspects.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2007-01-27 06:55 AM

Thank you for all your kind responses. Seems I only have energy to respond on weekends.
I don't think there is a smarter group of 6-7 year olds anywhere like this group, who challenge me to challenge them every day.

So instead of dreaming poetry, I dream fun learning activities for them to do...

M

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