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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2007-01-24 02:07 AM



Well...i've been an incredible long time absent..and i think that i'll be absent a longer time after this, but i want to share this with you all.
This is what happened some time ago, i wanted to post it but i didn't find the time...or the strenght.Well, nothing more to say.
Enjoy!.
Talking to God

I was all alone
without any hope
without any light
without any faith

many days i had passed
crying, trying to understand
how could i be better
i went to my personal hideout
in a very high place
and talked to god

he usually didn't answer
or his answers were difficult to understand

but the other day was different
i asked him
why he had allowed my enemies to be so strong
and i was still so weak
i asked him
why he didn't help me

like a thunder
his voice could be heard
you were never alone
you were never hurt
you have been protected
just as you many times asked to be

and then i asked
if he could tell me how did i end like that
he answered that he couldn't help me
in matters of the heart
because we all have freedom
to choose our own paths
and even more freedom
if it is a path of the heart

and then i realized his truth
i thanked him deeply
many days later i could heal my broken heart
i could recover my faith
and heal my fallen soul

who would have thought
that the answer to all my problems
had a very simple solution?
listen to your heart
and your path will be lightened
listen to your problems
and your path will be darkened
that's what i discovered
after talking to god

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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-01-25 06:01 PM


Nice write!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-01-27 09:55 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
3 posted 2007-02-04 03:25 AM


I really needed to hear this right now and I am glad I found it....I have recently felt myself slip from Gods grasp....I'll never forget the things that I went through and the things that I feel are so terrible that I don't deserve forgiveness. So thank you I really needed to hear this. I have also heard a booming voice but it wasn't pleasent. I will never understand what I went through. But thank you again. J
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2007-02-04 01:11 PM


good to read you again

nicely done!

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