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ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

0 posted 2007-01-23 04:36 PM

THOSE

There are:

Those that’s false
And those that’s real
~
Those who earn
And those who steal
~
Those who frown
And those who grin
~
Those who lose
And those who win
~
Those who love
And those who hate
~
Those what’s early
Those what’s late
~
Those what’s dirty
Those what’s clean
~
Those who’s generous
Those who’s mean
~
Those who come
And those who go
~
Those what’s fast
And those what’s slow
~
Those that rise
And those that fall
~
Those with nothing
Those with all
~
Those who run
And those who walk
~
Those who listen
Those who talk
~
Those who save
And those who spend
~
Those what borrow
Those what lend
~
Those in heaven
Those in hell
~
Those who buy
And those who sell
~
Those that whisper
Those that shout
~
Those who believe
And those who doubt
~
Those with friends
And those with foes
~
Those with joys
And those with woes
~
Those that’s young
And those that’s old
~
Those that’s scared
And those that’s bold
~
Those who break
And those who make
~
Those that give
And those that take
~
Those who’s heavy
Those who’s light
~
Those that read
And those that write
~
Those that’s nasty
Those that’s nice
~
Those like fire
And those like ice

Those who’s calm
And those who’s wild
~
Those who’s adult
And those who’s child
~
Those who succeed
And those who fail
~
Those who’s female
Those who’s male
~
Those who’s mums
And those who’s dads
~
Those who’s girls
And those who’s lads
~
Those who’s fat
And those who’s thin
~
Those who sink
And those who swim
~
Those that’s selfish
Those that care
~
Those who’s bald
And those with hair
~
Those with less
And those with more
~
Those who’s wealthy
those who’s poor
~
Those who quit
And those who try
~
Those who’s wet
And those who’s dry
~
Those who’s clever
Those who’s thick
~
Those who’s healthy
Those who’s sick
~
Those who laugh
And those who cry
~
Those who live
And those who die
~
And those who go that extra mile
To write a verse to make you smile!

Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-23 08:14 PM

yep, I'm smiling here Ivor - well done and thank you !

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2007-01-23 09:11 PM

Ivor,
And that you did. A remarkable write to express for every negative there is a positive. Every black has its white
and every wrong has its right. Who so ever reads this I'm sure will be as impressed as I.

The_Nameless_One
Member

since 2007-01-20

Posts 165
Missouri

3 posted 2007-01-23 09:24 PM

nice job on showing how for every

there is a

Beatrice Boyle
Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 438

4 posted 2007-01-24 04:12 AM

Good job Ivor...I've always said you had an answer for everything!

Bea

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-01-24 01:18 PM

Faultless rhyme throughout, and you made me smile.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2007-01-24 06:24 PM

"And those who go that extra mile
To write a verse to make you smile!"

Well done Sir! I very much enjoyed the read.
And thank you for the smile!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

7 posted 2007-01-25 04:02 PM

There's those who visit
those who host

There's those who read
and those who post

But those who comment on my rhyme
are those I'll cherish all the time!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA