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HopeS
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0 posted 2007-01-23 07:52 AM



To Remind Them I Still Care

They are not ready to listen
Not much more I can do
So I shall continue to write
Still hoping I get through

I shall continue reaching out
In the hope that they see
While keeping them in mind
Since they matter to me

Hoping they will see the light
On me they can depend
Even through the dark times
I shall remain their friend

I do realise the troubles in life
Can become hard to bear
So I send my thoughts often
To remind them I still care


Hope ©2007

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1 posted 2007-01-23 07:56 AM


wonderfully said! and from a wonderful heart!


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2 posted 2007-01-23 08:13 AM


Hope, you and I seem to have the same feelings, my friend. There are so many times, when you have written what was in my heart.
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3 posted 2007-01-23 10:34 PM


A familiar plea of just about anyone who loves someone - and well written.  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-01-23 11:40 PM


So I send my thoughts often
To remind them I still care

Hope, just lovely words here   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The_Nameless_One
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5 posted 2007-01-23 11:50 PM


makes me think of my best friend
thanks I needed that
I will probably have this lingering in my head for weeks to come
looking forward to your next post with anticipation

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