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Zeiden
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0 posted 2007-01-23 01:52 AM



I gaze into the pale moon
But no matter how I try
When I look upon her majesty
I cannot help but cry

Beauty is all around me
And yet I cannot feel it
This beauty it surrounds me
And yet I cannot steal it

It eludes me
It dances around me
It beckons to me
Yet I still cannot take part in it

When I gaze into the pale moon
Before laying me down to sleep
I thank the Lord for this day past
But also pray it to be my last

© Copyright 2007 Micheal Williams - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2007-01-23 06:47 AM


that ending surprised me

nice write

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2007-01-23 01:47 PM



the ending surprised me too

good work...


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