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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2007-01-22 10:42 PM



Announcement Of Mauve

Unveiling first of winter dawn
Announcement of mauve
If glorious could blush
First thought shared the moment
Just there, hovering expression
In a candy sky

Summoning intoxicating glimpse
White clouds parting a pathway
For blue day in gold ray
Oh, the million dreams provoked
Sitting at the end of a dock
Java bean, my chin esteem

We share water, you and I
Power and fluidity, depth and emotion
Though I would give a noble home, the notion
For days spent in the tune of my nature
Chopping wood to electric bass
Getting busy on a noontime break

Allure and a fish pole humming afternoon blues
Dinner in the twilight of Sinatra
Starlight sets the table in the garnish of gems
Holding you, eyes closed in the flow of moments
Following your lead, following your hands
Seasons change full around to be mauve

Unveiling first of winter dawn
And closely just beneath, unveiling us

Copyright Kkh 1/22/07

© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2007-01-23 08:15 AM


Very beautiful!
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2007-01-23 09:44 AM


Kathleen~

'If glorious could blush'

... oh my ... what a thought~

Beautiful ... but then ... you always are~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
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3 posted 2007-01-23 01:33 PM



dang it
Marge took my line and she's right
magnificent line

a poem as delicate as mauve shadows
lingering under a lady's eyes

beautiful TD

JL
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4 posted 2007-01-23 02:09 PM


"Allure and a fish pole humming afternoon blues
Dinner in the twilight of Sinatra
Starlight sets the table in the garnish of gems
Holding you, eyes closed in the flow of moments
Following your lead, following your hands
Seasons change full around to be mauve"

WOW - WOW - WOW!
This is beautiful indeed!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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5 posted 2007-01-23 07:58 PM







Something like this, I think......

You bring us the picture, the mood....and you use it very well.

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-01-23 08:01 PM


Kathleen... just beautiful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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7 posted 2007-01-23 10:18 PM


Just lovely!  A very soothing evening read.
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