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lil' Angel
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0 posted 2007-01-22 10:33 PM



My mind is filled
Filled with thoughts of you
Thoughts of wanting to be back in your arms
Thoughts of wanting things to work out between us
Thoughts of wanting us to be together
Thoughts of wanting things to be the way they use to be
Thoughts of longing for you to see
That I truly am in love with you
Can’t you see that you’re all that’s on my mind?  

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



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SmartChick
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1 posted 2007-01-23 08:19 AM


I am so sorry you are expierencing this, too. I understand your feelings very well. I just hope your situation turns out better than mine did.
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2 posted 2007-02-22 11:28 PM


well put , very good and to the point ! keep writing 4 sure
~wolf

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-02-23 04:48 AM


yes I hear you in these words... sending you some hugs to get you thru... very much enjoyed RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-02-25 10:09 PM


Nice writing...James
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