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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-01-22 08:05 PM


Reaching Eternity

I heard a song called "Love Shack",
I liked the way it sounds,
so I decided to build me one
in a meadow on the outside of town.
I gathered up some lumber,
a hammer and some nails,
drew up the plans showing
all of the desired details.
It had to have a dance floor
and a blaring stereo,
some love seats and a hot tub,
warmed up and ready to go.
Within our private bedroom
my sweetheart will keep me company
as we hug and kiss the nights
away until we reach eternity.

JamesLee
20January
2007





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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-01-22 08:20 PM


"love shack, baby, love shack"  ooh now you have me singing here James!! 'love shack, baby, love shack"!!  enjoyed  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2007-01-22 08:56 PM


James,
I like the way you write.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2007-01-23 07:04 AM


I've thought of building myself one too LOL
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2007-01-23 01:26 PM



nice work James
sounds like a good idea to me

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