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xfearlesschildx
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since 2007-01-18
Posts 6
MN, United States

0 posted 2007-01-21 10:44 PM



Despite what has been said, and what has happened.
I still care.
Beside your selfish feelings, lay my painful cries.
With all the problems infront of my eyes,
I still fight to stand with pride.
Slowly i move forward.
To become all that i can be.
Your wandering through life, not knowing what to do.
Your eyes glazed with an unseen view.
My head is on straight,
They say im strong.
Mistake after mistake,
You've done wrong.
Even though we are over,
I hope you the best.
And want you to know,
We were regretless.

© Copyright 2007 Tiffany - All Rights Reserved
The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri
1 posted 2007-01-21 11:08 PM


very nice expression of emotional depth
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-01-22 09:18 PM


Tiffany...welcome to our blue pages.. I hope to read more of your work... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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