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In a dark room within
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In a dark room within |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
A friend, A foe, who do I turn to? Can you tell me how to get out of this dark room I laugh, I love , I enjoy life Why have I been given this dark room I live in.. My innocence stripped from me.. Left alone to deal with it.. Couldn't turn to you... You wouldn't believe.. Not knowing better you left me on that hill Cause you thought it was my cure A dark room it was where a possible cure existed.. Yet the cure came with a lonely price.. Memories that haunt my every day Every breath I took was precious Every day I woke up was a blessing But that all came with a price... How do I forget? Can it be forgotten? As much as I love and laugh As much as I enjoy life As much as I am thankful for every breath I take I sometimes find myself as a kid left alone on that hill ** this Poem is dedicated to a long time friend, who in youth suffered but prevailed as an adult... Jen [This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (01-22-2007 05:14 PM).] |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
I know exactly how you feel. All I can say is keep your head up and you will get through it. good job on this piece |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I've been to that dark place you are refering too....what we bring back into the light with us it what counts.....Take Care ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that last verse got me...I do understand |
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