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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2007-01-21 02:32 PM



January Tanka





Trees alive, moving
Brown tails twitch, wings a’flutter
Dislodged snow falling
Limbs will soon enough denude
Crystals finding their own kind


" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

© Copyright 2007 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2007-01-21 02:42 PM


Sunshine
As lovely as the new born snow.

Bridget Shenachie
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Kansas USA
2 posted 2007-01-21 05:20 PM


Snow accumulates
Perfect for packing snowballs
Five inches or more
Tomorrow is a snow day
To hang out with the snow man.

Shenachie

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displaced
3 posted 2007-01-22 08:00 AM


burrrrrrrr
Sunshine
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4 posted 2007-01-22 07:29 PM



Not all of the trees have lost their
icy weight;

But the roads are fairly clear in most
spots.

Lots of chances, yet, to build
the snowman of our dreams!




SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2007-01-22 08:18 PM


A wonderful tanka, Karilea!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2007-01-22 09:04 PM


Beautiful Karilea!  

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-01-22 09:06 PM


I love this !!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The Lady
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The Southwest
8 posted 2007-01-23 01:49 AM




amazing

and I thought your muse had gone on vacation
nooo...




iliana
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9 posted 2007-01-23 03:25 AM


"Crystals finding their own kind" -- WIHTOT!

Beautiful photo, too, SIL!  *hugs*...jo

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