Good descriptive poetry of a current mood/dilemma.
I have a piece I will shortly post on serious depression, but the only way to attempt cure is exactly what you are doing in this piece. To analyse the feelings and make a decision in regard to but independent to, your feelings.
This is an extremely good piece of poetry, in which you show that to remedy any situation you first have to recognize it.
The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.