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Without Praise
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Without Praise |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Without Praise Cramped body and mind by thoughts trying to exchange everyday "whys". Cold seeping in betrayed by believing, lack of support creating holes. Shadows drain the night while behind the mask a stranger emerges Taking up the alone, its cloak heavy without praise. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short lines but how they do create vivid imagery nicely done |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Maureen...."why" can be such a dangerous question when it lets in the dark and alone.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Maureen.... very nice! RDB  Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I will heap lots of praise on this one, Maureen Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"lack of support creating holes." Lack of support literally does create holes in one's aura. I don't simply read your poetry, ~ I feel it. Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sending you heart hugs pretty lady~ In the midst of winter, I found there lives within me.. An invincible summer. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sending you a great big hug, my friend.  |
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