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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-01-19 12:02 PM


                                                           eve tightened her grip

before i could slip away into the night

i was frightened that her hips would trip up my intentions to skip away before her grip on my heart became to tight  

to lightened up my intentions to dip her Doritos into enough salsa to hear our cries of passion rip through issues black and white enough

                                                         for anyone to see clearly

that any time she's near me

                                                                 i'm in heaven



                                                                                                                 love,

                                                                                                                 howard



              


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2007-01-20 06:22 AM


oh Howard... they way you have with words! I love it!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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2 posted 2007-01-20 02:40 PM


I haven't been keeping up on the letters lately but I know I'lll be impressed every time....take care, JA

~~~kingsangel~~~

howardtsu
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3 posted 2007-01-20 05:09 PM


thanks roniece

thanks angel

i've missed you  

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