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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The snow swirls Down Main Street Toward the white church At the end of town The World War bronze His uplifted hand Catching crystals As they fall through air Street lights With different colors on and off By the lake Ducks huddle along the shore No one remembers How or who summer was It is winter Cold night— With no star in the sky . |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, but I remember summer! Awesome write John. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love winter. Send some snow this way.It has been avoiding us this year so far... M |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you both This one is a little difficult . . . Thanks again, John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching write |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... love your winter write here..  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sorry that it is a difficult time... M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And this winter holds no hope of spring... *sigh* I do love your work! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Excellent! You get the feel just right in this one. What can I say? I wish I could have summer back. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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