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Tom Zart
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0 posted 2007-01-19 12:41 PM


RIVER FISHING


After school my friend and I would walk through town to the river
Soon to bait our trout lines with cotton cake, crawdads and liver.
Sometimes we used baby bullheads, perch or great big frogs
Tossing out into the current next to a snag of logs.

At times we would disrobe and wade out in the stream
Attaching lines to anything hoping to hook our dream.
One day I made some doe bait and stuffed it in my sock
Attached five hooks, hundred pound line and tied it to a rock.

When I bragged to my classmates they snickered and called me fool
Till the next day they followed me to the river after school.
I made my way to the water my path was a fallen tree
Something big was on my line it was easy for us to see.

I tried to pull it in but the current was too strong
Three boys ran to assist me as we began to sing a song.
Going fishing instead of wishing for the granddaddy of them all
If we land this monster will give the sport shows a call.

It seemed like forever before our beast was ashore
Eighty-five pounds of flathead cat as big as a closet door.
We shared his steaks at a fish fry, food for heart and soul
Took his head and nailed it high for all to see on a pole.

For a time we ceased our casting instead we chased the girls
After marriage with our kids we again fished the swirls.
Too many of my friends have past and the years have raced by
Though here I sit with rod in hand a fisherman till I die.


By Tom Zart


© Copyright 2007 Tom Zart - All Rights Reserved
Behind the Wall
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1 posted 2007-01-19 12:54 PM


This made me smile.

Thanks for sharing.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-01-19 04:39 AM


Tom... very nice - I love your story telling   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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3 posted 2007-01-19 08:36 AM


Can't beat the sound of simple pleasures.
This was an awesome tale Tom.
TD

Tom Zart
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4 posted 2007-01-19 08:58 AM


Thanks to all for your kindness.
The Lady
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5 posted 2007-01-19 07:04 PM




I love the way you fish and tell Tom!


Tom Zart
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6 posted 2007-01-19 10:40 PM


Thank you for your time and helpful reply.
trutodaraiders
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7 posted 2007-01-27 02:08 AM


Great Story. Your poems are always easy to the readers eyes
Tom Zart
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8 posted 2007-01-27 09:22 AM


trutodaraiders


Thank you for your reply you should write a
poem about love and war I feel your passion
would make it come out just fine.

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