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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-01-18 09:14 AM


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In a dream
Again a kid—

I eat the whole bag


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-01-18 09:52 AM


hehe
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2 posted 2007-01-18 10:08 AM


I do as well...only in my dreams.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2007-01-18 05:38 PM


I do that with Cheetos
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-01-18 07:10 PM


LOL !!  love it John!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 2007-01-18 07:21 PM


Huan,
Short(as always), salty (as not), but straight to the point ( MMMMMM !).
Doc

Huan Yi
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6 posted 2007-01-18 08:07 PM


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Thank you all,

The odd thing,
when I woke up
I felt full . . .

If only we could live on our dreams
how fashionably slender we would be . . .

Thanks again,

John

PS

nt,

"Cheetos"

How you make my mouth water . . .

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (01-18-2007 09:56 PM).]

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2007-01-18 09:53 PM


Done that a few times myself...James
Huan Yi
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8 posted 2007-01-18 10:00 PM


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JM,

Doing it
is not the mystery . . .

That you should dream at all
is the miracle . . .


John


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arbpoet
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9 posted 2007-01-21 01:46 AM


Short and sweet. The best chips are Pringles. I love the baked salty goodness.
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