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HopeS
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0 posted 2007-01-18 12:41 PM



I Continue On In My Quest

I assume the missing piece
Is being held back obviously
Since they have only shown
What they wanted me to see

Meanwhile I was left to think
I had patience to perservere
Its been an ongoing process
The picture was not yet clear

Something was still missing
There was this empty space
In getting closer to the truth
I need pieces to fit into place

Maybe it will take me forever
As I continue on in my quest
Until this puzzle was solved
My mind could no longer rest


Hope ©2007  


Link to the poem with music and graphic at the URL below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/104/poem_83854057.html

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trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2007-01-18 02:03 AM


This poem will hit for many people. We are all out to find something. I hope you complete the puzzle. I hope that we all do
HopeS
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2 posted 2007-01-18 02:06 AM


Thank you so much for your understanding reply , yes I continue to hope , its helps me cope

Hope

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-01-18 04:59 AM


Hope... lovely words here... we are all on a journey...   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

HopeS
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4 posted 2007-01-18 05:04 AM


Thanks so much RDB for your thoughtful reply


Hugs Hope

passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-01-18 07:16 AM


Hope, I'm beginning to think there is always something missing no matter how much one has in life


LeeJ
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6 posted 2007-01-18 07:23 AM


Hope, you demonstrate our entire individual reasons here...not only for us, but to touch the lives of others, as well, however, we do learn so much...right up until our last.  

Incredible life, isn't it...

Incredible poet, are you.

thank you for sharing.

HopeS
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7 posted 2007-01-18 07:28 AM


Dixie and Lee , thank you so much , you are both such thoughtful and understanding friends

Hope

vandana
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8 posted 2007-01-18 12:31 PM


good read
HopeS
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9 posted 2007-01-18 12:33 PM


Thank you once again Vandana for reading this twice

Hope

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