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Open Poetry #40

Oceans of Tears

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-01-17 11:08 AM

                        could i love you for eternity?

the question is constantly burning me

i wish you were learning me the right way to talk to your heart

i walked up to you that Friday night at the start of our friendship

                                       anticipating hours of kinship

bringing you carts of flowers numerous enough to fill up ten Queen Mary ships

                                you're so humerous just being yourself

i wish there were rumors of us being constantly stacked on your shelf

i think your friendly consumer has convinced you that he's the elf

                                                        you need

while i'm struggling in weeds that won't let me succeed in my attempts to plead

                                                  for your forgiveness

                                                                                                love,

                                                                                                howard

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2007-01-17 11:20 AM

ohhh...that last line sums it up so nicely. Very well done.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-01-18 05:08 AM

oh Howard... I feel you in this one... RDB

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