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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-01-17 09:29 AM


Grace ,
such as this

I have never known before
felt so deeply
it moves me, to the core

and I am sure

that there is no sunrise
that can ever compare
to the beauty held in your sighs

and your eyes;

somehow,
they always see
past the surface
into the heart of me

when we

speak, without saying a word,
it's the loveliest sound
that I've ever heard

and I am so blessed
by your presence
that I swear my soul soars

Grace,
such as this

I've no right to ask for.....

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-01-17 09:38 AM


Grace ... a MEANINGFUL word!
Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2007-01-17 11:07 AM


Awsome words..
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3 posted 2007-01-17 11:25 AM


Gentle Spirit
A delight to read.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2007-01-17 01:22 PM


you have the kindess heart, and colorful muse...this was sooooo pretty, thank you
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just out of reach
5 posted 2007-01-17 01:27 PM


Tender and sweet...like you Donna.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-01-18 04:54 AM


and your eyes;

somehow,
they always see
past the surface
into the heart of me

I love your words my sweet gentle Donna RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2007-01-18 07:43 AM


dear friends, thank you all so very much...      peace
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8 posted 2007-01-18 12:31 PM


good read
passing shadows
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9 posted 2007-01-18 01:20 PM


very pretty, yes
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10 posted 2007-01-18 03:27 PM



gentle Donna
this is so perfect
and you have every right to ask for
grace such as this...

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2007-01-19 08:31 AM


Thank you, each.  Have a fantastic weekend ya'll!!
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12 posted 2007-01-23 02:45 PM


The greatest gifts are those we never asked for... never thought we deserved. *S* This is beautiful! *S*
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