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wredgranny
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0 posted 2007-01-17 12:36 PM




  I Shed Tears!
I shed tears and no one sees them,my heart breaks and no one feels it,my shoulders bow beneath a weight far too heavy for them,my body trembles from a fear there is no fighting.

Sighs escape I can not control them,dreams of pasts I still own them,stories told my spirit sings them,fires dance with shadows in them,Eagle flies and we ignore him.

The whole world dies with mankind watching,how many times told by the old one's,how many screams rip our dreams,how much blood turned to mud,how many years do we go on hurting?

From the first we made ourselves clear,we did not want what they offered,we had no need for gold and riches,we honored instead rainbows and roses.

How can you place value on liquid golden sunlight,on clean clear sparkling waters,a sky so blue you can not explain it,a land where wahya walks free, a peace so still a whisper destroys it?

What greater gift than a childs laughter,when they are allowed to be free,when no thought would ever enter of harming,when no one had to keep them safe from kidknapping?

Have you ever stood upon a mountian,looked across a mist covered valley,see nothing but blue,brown,and green,with a splash of wild flowers and watch a deer feed?

Do you understand yet,will you ever,it is not what you can take that is important,but the kindness you leave behind you!

granny



  granny!

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trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2007-01-17 12:43 PM


Such pure words..I loved reading this.
The Lady
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2 posted 2007-01-17 12:53 PM



"we had no need for gold and riches,we honored instead rainbows and roses"

your poems always move me Granny


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2007-01-17 01:21 AM


"How can you place value on liquid golden sunlight,on clean clear sparkling waters,a sky so blue you can not explain it,a land where wahya walks free, a peace so still a whisper destroys it?"

~ Granny, we need you to keep on reminding us what we are losing through our lack of respect for Mother Nature.

I am always moved by your wise words.

Love & Nature Spirit Light,

EA

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-01-17 03:54 AM


Do you understand yet,will you ever,it is not what you can take that is important,but the kindness you leave behind you!

Granny... the wisdom in your words shows us all that we must strive to be better people within ourselves... and leave behind some kindness .... just breathtaking words my poet friend... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

time prophet
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5 posted 2007-01-17 05:53 AM


Yes, I have stood on the mountain. Yet I wonder if my childrens children will be able to. Perhaps they will find different mountains. Your peoples stories are shared by many others throughout the world.
Sunshine
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6 posted 2007-01-17 07:38 AM


Dekanogi Ulogilv,

One wonders why this song of yours
is not inherent in every human's heart.

It is basic, simple, and would mean
the most to all mankind, should
he or she realize it.

To copy a favorite line, would be to
reprint all of your poem here.

Just know that I know...and perhaps between
you and I, we can multiply into more?

Before it is really too late?



Vsigi

Nvdaegehi Utsisdalugisgv

passing shadows
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7 posted 2007-01-17 07:53 AM


indeed! We all need this reminder!
LeeJ
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8 posted 2007-01-17 08:39 AM


darling lady, what a tremendous life altering poem you offer to us...very wise...
thank you

wredgranny
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9 posted 2007-01-18 01:06 AM




Sigi Trutodaraiders it is the tears from my spirit I gift here to share,for the past,the future,and for those of us who walk the hard path!
blessings


  granny!

wredgranny
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10 posted 2007-01-18 01:08 AM



Sigi my Lady sister,in truth this is my path chosen long before my first breath!


  granny!

wredgranny
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11 posted 2007-01-18 01:10 AM




Elohi Anidawehi you are heart sister to Mother Earth herself,you hear her calls to us all and your spirit will answer!
my love and blessings


  granny!

wredgranny
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12 posted 2007-01-18 01:11 AM


Do you understand yet,will you ever,it is not what you can take that is important,but the kindness you leave behind you!

Granny... the wisdom in your words shows us all that we must strive to be better people within ourselves... and leave behind some kindness .... just breathtaking words my poet friend... RDB
Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........


Sigi my friend for you,understand well the message here!
blessings


  granny!

wredgranny
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13 posted 2007-01-18 01:15 AM


Yes, I have stood on the mountain. Yet I wonder if my childrens children will be able to. Perhaps they will find different mountains. Your peoples stories are shared by many others throughout the world.

O'siyo Time Prophet,yes to your question,they will for it is told by the ancients the "way" of this fourth world will end,and soon,it is time my friend for the Fifth the time of women,peace,and healing! Time, untime, has ended.Those who still share that connection to Mother Earth,hear still the song of peace yes,and know the stories well!


  granny!

wredgranny
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14 posted 2007-01-18 01:19 AM


One wonders why this song of yours
is not inherent in every human's heart.

~AHhhh,beloved Nvdaegehi Utsisdatugisgv it is,it is very simply they make so much noise to drown it out,much like two year olds in a tantrum of wanting what I want,and wanting it NOW!Have you ever tried to reason with an angry two year old,lol?


  granny!

wredgranny
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15 posted 2007-01-18 01:20 AM




Sigi PassingShadows may the voices of the grandmothers never be stilled,eh?


  granny!

wredgranny
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16 posted 2007-01-18 01:22 AM




Sigi from my heart LeeJ,it is love,tears and hope I plea for,that none ever forget,that given has twice the value of that taken!


  granny!

ivordavies
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17 posted 2007-01-30 03:52 PM


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Have you ever stood upon a mountain,looked across a mist covered valley,see nothing but blue,brown,and green,with a splash of wild flowers and watch a deer feed?

Do you understand yet,will you ever,it is not what you can take that is important,but the kindness you leave behind you!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

wredgranny,

The answer to your question is yes, and I will never cease to be amazed that some people I stand shoulder to shoulder with cannot see beyond the limitations of their eyes.

I have also stood in the midst of greed, chaos and every modern trait that moves Mankind away from the universal source.  Yet I still see the simple beauty and reality of the life force.

I have lived in a different world from you and am jealous of your heritage.  I feel the wrongs that man has and is doing.  In another post you say that 'magic' is not evil but in various guises religion and greed have classed it as such. I am tainted by some religions with such nonsense.

Yes, a very different world, where I too can be mocked for my beliefs and journeys into places others are not aware of.  Where I too am guided by spirits to maintain a balance between the spiritual and the very essence of  our souls.

I have been fascinated by your writes and find the difference in the chaos that reins in my 'modern' day environment such contrast to your endevours to maintain balance between spirit, man and nature.

Our history is our future, our awareness of creation and our ethereal place within it is our inner sanctuary.

What legacy will we leave and what will we carry with us when we unite again with spirit.

Different people, different age, different obstacles.....

same journey....

Ivor

  
  

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