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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

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Bewilderment , USA

0 posted 2007-01-16 05:15 PM

Vast coral forests crystallized beneath a sea of ice
The flora of this world appears, encapsulated forms.
To emulate such artistry one could name any price
for frozen sculptures shimmering, encased by such a storm.

Refracting light which glimmers through great spider webs of glass,
prismatic bursts color radiate in rainbow hues
to wink from weighted branches at each frozen breeze to pass
their statuesque demeanor lost, as dancing light ensues.

The stasis of this frigid scene by animation's touched,
participants in concert flash their jewel encrusted crowns
in honor of the Ice Queens' Ball, for she demands as much
in crisply stated whispers as the temperature dips down.

For what time conditions favor such an awe inspiring sight,
let this dance of hers' continue to fill eyes with pure delight.

Generationaway
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since 2007-01-15

Posts 7
UK

1 posted 2007-01-16 05:31 PM

I loved the imagery, superb in each stanza. A delightful sonnet, thank you.

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

2 posted 2007-01-18 07:03 PM

Generationaway,
Thank you, interesting moniker. This is what I percieved of a recent ice storm that passed through our area. We were fortunate, there were some who saw only devastation and death. As with all of Natures' wonders
and furies it would seem there was a fine line between beauty and the appreciation of it.
Doc

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

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USA

3 posted 2007-03-01 02:15 AM

Very interesting poetry you write. Sparked my inspiration, imagination and curiousity. I will definitely look for more!!! Take Care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-03-01 06:32 AM

filled with imaginative energy, magical with a strangeness and intensity of wanting more...grasping the nature of ambiguous cold
delightful read!

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

5 posted 2007-03-01 09:09 AM

"The flora of this world appears, encapsulated forms.
To emulate such artistry one could name any price"

I often think this way, too, if only one could capture such beauty ... *sigh* ... for it is priceless.

Enjoyed this perspective, fabulous writing here.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-03-01 02:13 PM

Doc~
What you do to poetry ...
is to perfect it~

Outstandingly lovely~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

7 posted 2007-03-01 03:36 PM

Angel4aKing,
Thanks for taking the time to reply. I'm glad you enjoyed this. On reflection, I'd say it was a little "over the top" even for me, Thanks again,
Doc

LeeJ,
Thank you for your kind words.
Doc

Janette,
Thank you. It looked like something out of a Disney movie. As of this writing they are forecasting 3/4" of ice for our area tonight.
Doc

Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

8 posted 2007-03-01 08:02 PM

Dear Marge,
Thank you so much. I try to "call 'em like I see 'em ". Once again, congratulations on your recent publishing, it is well deserved, and something tells me, if we're fortunate,
there will be more forthcoming.
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (03-02-2007 02:07 PM).]

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