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That would be a Lie
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That would be a Lie |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
That would be a Lie If I say a day could pass without a thought of you. That would be a lie… If I say I have not lived In dreams with you. That would be a lie… If I say you are not in my hopes of future schemes That too, would be a lie… What can I say? Not one word to explain why. That would be a lie… |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
redressing the imbalance by festivity throughout the margins of our lives....and most thoughtfully designed... lovely write JL  |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Sometimes silence is the only truth there is...especially with the heart. Nicely done!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done JL and much enjoyed!  In the midst of winter, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I understood this. It goes deeper, and you wrote it very well. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
JL... I understand your words perfectly! well done... RDB |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Always enjoy reading you ~ and that's no lie!  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Much enjoyed - vey good. A |
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