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Open Poetry #40

My Dear I Love You

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-01-16 02:08 AM

My Dear I Love You

If she were sincere

I could hold her near

and whisper in her ear

"My dear, I love you."

JamesLee
15January
2007

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2007-01-16 02:13 AM

Such a simple wholehearted poem. Nice ~Bill

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-01-16 05:58 AM

James... enjoyed this RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2007-01-16 07:15 AM

If?

hmmm....

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-01-16 10:51 PM

sincere?

ahh James...
sad

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2007-01-16 11:53 PM

Thank you truto, Roniece, passing and Lady for the nice responses...
I will leave you to decide if the "If" is her lack of sincerity or my lack of trusting and believing...
For now questions will suffice...
In the future answers will be necessary...James

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