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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 2007-01-15 04:15 PM



Take these broken wings and learn to fly again….

We break our wings.. every time we fall.  
We try to heal and we do.  
But could we ever fly the same again?  
For every time we break a wing..
we learn a valuable lesson…
which can liberate us of our inhibitions and make us stronger
Or incarcerate us in a world of darkness and pain leaving us weak…  
I guess the choice is ours to make…  

We cut the pattern to our own life  
Once the choice is made we have to live with it…..

Some of us will take a wrong turn and live to cry many tears.  

Some of us will make the right turn and not appreciate the gift.  

Some of us stay at a stand still
choose nothing and live a boring life…
Not really enjoying the beauty of it.  

Some will choose to walk straight  
live to experience many full moons, sunsets, sunrises, crazy moments, unforgettable emotions and inexplicable outcomes…

Jen

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1 posted 2007-02-10 10:19 AM


Eventually you reach a point where you don't even want to fly again.....a shame, but it's true, and it's a tragedy worse than broken wings.

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2 posted 2007-02-10 10:39 AM


I'm with Ed


MindBodySoul
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3 posted 2007-02-10 10:57 AM


Thank you for your thoughts, and I believe that we all reach that point...

However, I hold hope that we never have to reach it...

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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