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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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0 posted 2007-01-15 03:59 PM



It is said that true friendships come once in a life time.  
Those who come into your life..
have a purpose
a reason for being.  
People may come and go..
but just a few
make a true impression in your life.  
We must never let them go..
for you will never find
the same connection again.
And though sometimes we may make mistakes
play the wrong cards.. lie...
A true friendship
could not be dissolved...
These fall outs
would just be a test
of strength and of time....
To see how true
your friendship really was....  
Embrace those who bring you comfort..
those who you can talk to
those who you can trust...  
for one day..
you will find yourself alone..
needy of a true friend
and having none at all..  




Jen

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (01-16-2007 09:05 AM).]

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trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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1 posted 2007-01-15 10:48 PM


I like what you wrote, and understand your point.
I think that if you found a structure to convey your words would help. Just a humble opinion ~Bill

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2007-01-16 07:39 AM


nicely said
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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3 posted 2007-01-20 06:13 AM


I like your words too! well done! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2007-09-17 05:00 PM


Nice...as you say, value a friendship...especailly a close one...James
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