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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 01-15-2007 03:59 PM       View Profile for MindBodySoul   Email MindBodySoul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for MindBodySoul


It is said that true friendships come once in a life time.  
Those who come into your life..
have a purpose
a reason for being.  
People may come and go..
but just a few
make a true impression in your life.  
We must never let them go..
for you will never find
the same connection again.
And though sometimes we may make mistakes
play the wrong cards.. lie...
A true friendship
could not be dissolved...
These fall outs
would just be a test
of strength and of time....
To see how true
your friendship really was....  
Embrace those who bring you comfort..
those who you can talk to
those who you can trust...  
for one day..
you will find yourself alone..
needy of a true friend
and having none at all..  




Jen

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (01-16-2007 09:05 AM).]

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trutodaraiders
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1 posted 01-15-2007 10:48 PM       View Profile for trutodaraiders   Email trutodaraiders   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for trutodaraiders

I like what you wrote, and understand your point.
I think that if you found a structure to convey your words would help. Just a humble opinion ~Bill
passing shadows
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2 posted 01-16-2007 07:39 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

nicely said
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 01-20-2007 06:13 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

I like your words too! well done! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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4 posted 09-17-2007 05:00 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice...as you say, value a friendship...especailly a close one...James
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