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Open Poetry #40

The Artisan (Haiku)

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2007-01-15 12:22 PM

I, feeling your heat,
melted like a wax statue;
your caprice my mold

CG

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2007-01-15 12:56 PM

This is a very well done Senryu

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2007-01-15 12:59 PM

Yes, Interloper, due to content closer to Senryu than a Haiku..

Thank you.

CG

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2007-01-15 03:50 PM

Senryu or Haiku...

it's a thing of beauty

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 2007-01-15 04:57 PM

Been there...Done that
Nicely put!

INclan

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2007-01-16 11:23 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting.

CG

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