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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2007-01-15 06:45 AM



Monday Morning Thoughts

Of yesterday,
when time had no meaning
and a whisper would travel forever,
the touch of lips never a memory
but a morning staple.

When expectations were "a granted"
and the coming home to,
such a pleasure-smile received.

When warmth was arms
instead of a soak
to surround and feed the skin
as a renewable source of energy.

Words to fill the emptiness,
without platitudes seeming life together...
these Monday morning thoughts asking
where is the beauty in tomorrow?

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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JL
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1 posted 2007-01-15 08:04 AM


"these Monday morning thoughts asking
where is the beauty in tomorrow?"

Wherever you can find it?
Or, make it happen?

Always enjoy your writing.
This is another one, for sure.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2007-01-15 11:30 AM


It always nice when 1's thoughts of tomorrows are not cliche..Enjoyed the read!
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2007-01-15 12:54 PM


Maybe the beauty in tomorrow is being able to see it?
Well done!
I loved it, Maureen

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-01-15 02:37 PM


don't know...which would I choose? a good hot bubble bath or arms...tough one there



nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2007-01-15 04:28 PM


"Maybe the beauty in tomorrow is being able to see it?"

very true~~~


M

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