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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

0 posted 2007-01-14 01:27 PM



.
Sharing our bodies
         is one kind of close...
Sharing our secret thoughts
         is another.


Taking the risk of
         stripping bare the ego...
         getting down to who we are
                               and still feeling loved
                               and still making love...
                                                  is the best there is.

Come close....

I trust you.

.

© Copyright 2007 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2007-01-14 02:21 PM


Enchantress

A delight to read.

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2007-01-14 03:19 PM


Smiling.

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3 posted 2007-01-14 03:34 PM


Nance~

Soft, sultry, sexy and sooooo lovely~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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4 posted 2007-01-14 03:34 PM


and grinning......
MoonShadow
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5 posted 2007-01-14 03:36 PM



   Take the risk....
         come close......
              I trust you.

Lovely thoughts, Nancy... what dreams are made of.

             MoonShadow
.

trutodaraiders
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6 posted 2007-01-14 03:39 PM


These words really got me thinking..I was moved by these words. I guess I really can't explain. I loved your thoughts and wish more people learned to trust.
SmartChick
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7 posted 2007-01-14 04:02 PM


That is definitely taking a big risk. One, I don't know that I could do again.
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8 posted 2007-01-14 08:47 PM


Powerfully stunning...this poem hit hard in a good way...how true it is that one must really trust someone to lay bare all that we are and still love....BRAVO!!!...A masterpiece....
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just out of reach
9 posted 2007-01-14 09:48 PM


Yet another beautiful write dear sister of mine.
Miss Ya & Hugs !!
Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

scorpio
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right...there
10 posted 2007-01-14 10:01 PM


This speaks to essence of love Tinker. Insightful and sensual words!!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2007-01-14 10:02 PM


you've written so eloquently "Trust"
wredgranny
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12 posted 2007-01-14 11:31 PM


Taking the risk of
         stripping bare the ego...
         getting down to who we are
                               and still feeling loved


Sigi Enchantress so softly beautiful!


  granny!

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13 posted 2007-01-15 12:41 PM


The best gift of all--the gift of trust that people can give each other. Beautiful work, Nancy!

sky

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~Tim McGraw

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14 posted 2007-01-15 06:42 AM


loved this Nancy - Paul
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Deep in the heart
15 posted 2007-01-15 12:48 PM


You said it, kid

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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16 posted 2007-01-15 03:47 PM




"the best there is"

so true Nancy
love it...

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2007-01-16 02:10 AM


Nice...for some it is hard to trust...I believe I am one of those...but I'm working on it...James
Enchantress
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18 posted 2007-01-16 08:53 AM





~Thank you all so much for your kind responses~

JL
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19 posted 2007-01-16 11:50 AM


Perfect, perfect, perfect!!
And beautifully warm.

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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20 posted 2007-01-16 12:14 PM


Taking the risk of
         stripping bare the ego...
         getting down to who we are
                               and still feeling loved


magnificant writing Lady Jane, very much enjoyed this

Martie
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21 posted 2007-01-16 02:45 PM


Nancy...such wisdom words are love like it should be.  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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22 posted 2007-01-17 06:08 AM


oh yes... wonderful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

arthur
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23 posted 2007-01-17 10:04 AM


very profound nancy

arthur

Enchantress
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24 posted 2007-01-17 01:43 PM



~Once again I thank you all, you're so very kind~

Waterfall27
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25 posted 2007-01-19 06:44 PM


beautiful write

JamesMichael
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26 posted 2007-06-03 03:15 PM


Still working on trust and believing...
Making wonderful progress...James

ladylisa
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27 posted 2007-06-04 07:40 AM


Could not have said it any better.  You went straight to my heart with this one.  Beautifully stated.
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28 posted 2007-06-04 08:55 AM


Nancy Lee... it is posts like this that make me truly realize how insignificant I am in the world of poetry.....
You are truly one of the best here.

What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?.
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Honeybunch
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29 posted 2007-06-04 09:51 AM


Beautiful poetry, Nancy!  Yes, at the heart of love lies that thing called "trust".
Enchantress
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30 posted 2007-06-04 10:54 AM



~Once again I thank you all so very much!~

ladylisa
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31 posted 2007-06-04 09:19 PM


you said it so beautifully, it is the best there is.   Loved it.
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