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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-01-14 11:33 AM



    "The Gray Blade"

A strong gray blade so sharp and true
a heart that glows with pride
Soft lovely lace with lilac hue
a Lady by his side.

A promise spoke to right the wrong
sealed warmly with a kiss
bring honor once again ‘er long
for such reward as this

A blushing face, a touch of lace,
of purple on pale thigh,
a heaving breast, a warm embrace,
a gentle loving sigh.

So ride away and win the day
for honor and her charms.
God speed return and there to earn
sweet passion in her arms.

© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2007-01-14 11:44 AM


Ken you are always a delight to read and have much passion in the heart well done sir
The Lady
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The Southwest
2 posted 2007-01-14 12:10 PM



MoonShadow
such passion would indeed
cause a heaving breast

sigh...

your purple poem is such stuff as dreams are made on


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2007-01-14 12:23 PM


Very nicely penned Ken.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2007-01-14 03:16 PM


Lilac scent lingers in the mind, long after the stroke of it's silken bells has tolled to the senses.
Loved this.
TD

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
5 posted 2007-01-14 05:47 PM



  Tru... I am pleased that you recognize that the fires burn sizzling hot in a 'seasoned heart'.

  Kate... Such dreams are what I live for.

  Nancy... Thank you for the read and response.

  T.Diamond.. what a lovely whisper of poetic passion and perfume.

               MoonShadow
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2007-01-15 12:40 PM


Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-01-17 05:43 AM


Ken... yes I can feel the passion in this from here!!  very nice ... RDB
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2007-01-17 07:41 AM



Yep, I think you've gone
and done won the day, Sir.

Enjoyed!


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