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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2007-01-13 10:13 PM


FIRE!
Planetary alchemy,
FIRE!
Shooting arrows for the clouds to see.
Here comes the next contestant..
Hands raised ready to strike,
Think twice it won't be the way you like.
Punch one punch two punch three punch four,
Let me help you find the door.
My turn,
You burn.
There goes the next contestant!
Here comes the next contestant..
Fresh from the bar and you're trashed,
Just about to get your face smashed.
Is that...your hand...touching my skin?
I'll watch you leave here limping so touch me again!
There goes the next contestant!
Here comes the next contestant..
What is it you think you're looking at?
Might want to have your friends pull you back, cat.
If there's one think I do know,
It's that you really should just go.
It's my turn,
Now you burn.
There goes the next contestant!
FIRE!
Planetary alchemy,
FIRE!
Shooting arrows for the clouds to see.
Here comes the next contestant...

Show me my vital signs untill I'm realigned

© Copyright 2007 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Jes
Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422
Denmark
1 posted 2007-01-13 11:23 PM


Hmmm seems wery violent thoughts, and abit dark too.

But i like the idea' in telling what really goes through peoples mind.

Smiles and best wishes

Jes / Dreamer

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
Posts 820
CA
2 posted 2007-01-14 02:18 AM


You bring a different mix to the blue pages nice vent
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